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I know you were looking for comments, so please don't think this is cheap.


I love everything you've done with this story. I love how you've had canon characters and events fall into place.

And your line for Sandor, about how he was "never good enough".
I started crying.

Please finish this fic.

Aw, you are so sweet. Thank you so very much! I'm incredibly flattered. I promise I won't leave you hanging.

Ahh I love this fic. I really like Harry and Sansa's relationship here. So great, keep up the good work.

This story gets more and more interesting. I agree with mmmuuu comment about Harry and Sansa's relationship. It's refreshing to see Harry's character the way you've written him, and that Sansa views Harry as like a brother is a good twist on the the usual storylines.

Thanks for sharing!

She loves easy, truly, and if he was kind to her at all and honest... it just makes sense he'd be family. Sansa has a big heart and a wolf needs a pack after all!

I have to agree with the comments above. We, as readers, are not given very much info on Harry's character in the books, and the things we do know about him are rather unflattering. As a result, the fics that include him tend to cast him in a harsh light. I really enjoy the way you write him and the dynamics you've built into his relationship with Sansa.
Great job! Can't wait to read more. Go write. Now! ;D

I was very much inspired by the parallels between Harry, what we know of him, and Robert Baratheon. Of course, by the time we get to meet Robert he is so very hardened and frustrated and worn, but through Eddard I grew to love him... what he once was, the ease of him, his love of life, his sense of humor... I wanted to play with that. Harry is still young and finds Sansa in very different circumstanes than Robert finds Cersei. That's what inspires it. I'm glad you all like it so much.

Y'know, I hadn't considered how similar Harry & Robert are. Aw. I may actually have to rethink how I see Harry now. :)

We know he'll have some part to play in Sansa's storyline sometime in the future, so it will be interesting to see how his character develops.

Love it. I'm so prepared to dislike Harry that I'm completely charmed by your version of him. So much so that if GRRM doesn't follow your lead, I'm going to be disappointed. :)

"It is better this way, Alayne. Goodbyes are wretched and now everyone will believe your grief, our grief. He had kissed her on the mouth. When he left her room, she threw up." Perfection. You nailed LF in both word and action and made him even more revolting, which is tough for me to say since he's a favorite of mine. :) Very well done indeed!

Littlefinger is one of my favorites, as far as character construction goes, but oh my, he is so so bad. I have a surprising amount of Littlefinger feels sometimes, however, so it's hard to step into that icky part of him, but it has to be done. I'm glad you liked it and thank you so much for that comment! Characterization is one of my main concerns.

I have never liked Harry....until now. Really enjoying this story

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